Completely fine. I need to fix mine now. On a kindle. Kill me.
Alright, I've edited everything, though I already had a description for each Digimon.
Name: Khaz Serwen
Birthday: October 31st
ERROR, english cover by Joy Dreamer
Lost One's Weeping, english cover by Juby Phonic
Lost Time Memory, english cover by Juby Phonic
Appearance: 5’ 10” and 165 lbs. Khaz has an attractive heart-shaped face which he has often exploited. Khaz has a boyish charm about his looks, yet not precisely childish. Yet neither is it strongly androgynous. This does not mean he doesn’t look his age.
Though Khaz tends to have more exposed spirited eyes that are often curious in nature. The intense darkness of his blue eyes always makes it easy for others to feel drawn into them. They’re like that mysterious dark place of the deep, deep ocean depths. They are so dark they seem black unless proper light strikes them.
His hair is coal black, smooth, and nearly flawless. It’s odd in the way it’s always messy even when Khaz used to attempt to brush it and make it lie flat. It grows out like that, up and all over the place in clumps sticking out at odd angles. There’s one section of his bangs that always falls just over his eye. He no longer bothers attempting to tame it. He often puts a little gel in it to give it some style even.
The darkness of his hair and eye color stands out beautifully against the paleness of his skin. Yet it is not a deathly pale. His skin is beautiful and smooth, always tempting those attracted to have an excuse to touch it. There are no scars or blemishes of any kind on his face.
He has a lean athletic body, toned and hardened from running and activity. He’s not lanky or too thin, yet not bulky and big in muscle. He is stuck somewhere between muscular and lean, lacking body fat thus his muscles are attractively defined. His body is obviously that of a teen’s that's starting to lean more toward becoming that of an older man’s. He has some scars scattered around his body, usually in places that don't show often. There are some cigarette burns.
Mostly Japanese, has American descent somewhere in his linage.
Clothes - He wears normal jeans. He keeps them to his waist, as he never liked having his pants to sag down enough to show his boxers. He thinks that’s more embarrassing than cool. He tends to favor black faded jeans, a dark blue shirt with a white baseball T left open over it. Sometimes he wears a long sleeves shirt under it. Sometimes it’s just a dark colored muscle shirt. He may also wear a dark blue over-shirt, unbuttoned (sometimes long-sleeved with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows) with a white muscle shirt underneath. He'll tend to wear a black belt, not leather. He always wears a silver watch with a shiny dark blue face.
Special Ability/Talent: Khaz is an incredible liar. It might not seem like much of a skill, but he is very good at being deceptive. This is not to say that Khaz is a compulsive liar. He lies to protect himself or for some other means to an end he has in mind. Khaz is difficult to understand, because you never know if he’s lying or playing you false. It can be difficult to know the real Khaz Serwen. Not to mention, he’s quiet the charmer when it comes to flirting with girls.
This aside, Khaz likes running. He makes sport of running around the city, jumping over obstacles and maneuvering around as fast as he can. This is known as parkour and free-running.
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Khaz and his parkour group also enjoy mixing parkour and free running with paintball games. This is typically what it looks like when Khaz does those paintball games: youtube. Khaz is a pretty awesome shot with a paintball gun.
Carried Possessions: Backpack, full of school stuff. Basic cell phone, dark blue, nothing too fancy. Wallet, and keys to house. ipod and headphones.
Type of Digidestined: Saver
Digivice Color: Midnight Blue
Role: Mystery Man
Personality: Khaz is very charming, cheerful, and likeable in general. He talks to others easily, makes jokes, and seems more extroverted. He makes friends easily, but he doesn’t share many deep or personal issues with them. If anything major happens in his life, he’s more likely to not mention it at all to them. He’ll just go on smiling and acting like nothing is out of the ordinary. He’s likely to become popular, even if not the most popular student.
However, he definitely lacks motivation and ambition in his life. His grades are poor due to his lack of focus. He doesn’t do any sports or other club activities. He likes to run but doesn’t join the track teams in school. He mostly likes to play video and computer games and mess around with his friends. He doesn’t have any hobbies. He spends a lot of time chasing girls and flirting with them. He tends to go through girlfriends very quickly.
Khaz has more anger issues than what he lets on the surface. He doesn’t get angry or upset if someone insults or abuses him directly. He doesn’t really seem to care what they do to him. However, if you pick on his little sister, Leita Serwen, he is very likely to attack verbally and/or physically. He’s intensely protective of her and doesn’t think anyone is good enough to date her either. He tends to scares of any boys who are interested.
Likes: Girls, flirting, sex, video/computer games, running, laughing, talking with friends, music, star gazing.
Dislikes: Being lectured, talking about his future, serious conversation, homework.
Virtues: Charismatic, caring, protective, and kind.
Vices: Escapist, unmotivated, overly protective, smothering, two-faced, and unforgiving.
History: His father was a cop, who got on the bad side of the yazuka. They attacked their home when he was 11, and both his parents were killed. Khaz was witness to the brutal deaths of his parents, particularly the death of his mother.
They were given into the care of their distant uncle, who would physically abuse him. When he was 14, he started noticing his sister becoming increasingly timid and breaking down. He didn’t find out until later, when he walked in on his uncle raping his sister, that he had been doing so for six months. He went mad and killed their uncle.
Naomi, another cop and a friend of his father’s, answered the call. She managed to argue the case for self-defense for Khaz, getting him off on the charges (they found evidence of previous physical abuse all over his body), and took them in as her foster kids. Khaz was mandated to see a therapist regularly. Naomi recently moved them, changing their school to somewhere a little closer, Shinjuku Senior High School. It was mostly to take them to a place where no one would know them. Vicious rumors spread like wild fire in their old school, and Khaz and Leita lost what friends they had once had. It was time to start over.
Leita Serwen: Khaz’s extremely timid younger sister. A young and very talented artist, she manages to hold excellent grades unlike her older brother. She means the world to Khaz, for she is his only family left.
Naomi Shizuka: A cop and a friend of his father’s. She’s a prideful but kind-hearted woman. Having never married or had children of her own because of she focused primarily on her career for most of her life, she decided to take in her old friend’s children. She didn’t want them to get lost in the system or get separated from each other, or worse, be abused yet again by another foster home. So to protect them, she had devoted herself to them. It’s been a couple years since the death of Khaz’s uncle, but the family has adjusted to each other. Naomi still feels rather new to the parent thing, but she is giving it her all.
Appearance: Dracmon’s basic form is similar to that of a small child’s, but closer to that of a doll equal to a 3-year-old’s general height. He has a generally humanoid form, his skin a light blue. He wears no shirt, but has a black hood on his head. Only his mouth is visible. Where his eyes should be are covered by the hood, but there is a red eye design and a green eye design in the places the eyes would be located under the hood. A black bandage is wrapped around his left bicep. He wears two black cuff-like bracers on his wrists. His hands have claws coming from the fingers that are dark pink. In the center of his palm on each hand is an eye-ball, one is red (left) and the other is green (right). Dark blue wings come from his back but wrap around his torso, under his arms, so that the two talon ends of them hook onto a blue gem that is where a belt-buckle would be. He wears black pants and has faded dark purple boots with three dark pink claws protruding from the toe-end. He has a little pointed, black devil’s tail. Though in his picture, Dracmon(s) are usually depicted as smiling manically. This Dracmon does not smile at all. His exposed mouth gives no expression.
Slide evolution/Burst Mode: Beelzemon Blast Mode
Personality: Normally, Dracmon digimon are naturally mischief-making psychopaths, especially when there is danger involved with the mischief. However, this Dracmon does not act at all like the others. He’s odd, expressionless, quiet. He hardly ever says a word, and generally doesn’t cause any mischief or seek it on purpose. He is an excellent fighter, because he is not distracted like the other hyper-active Dracmon are. He can focus and carry out his goals efficiently. However, he always seems emotionless. Emotions do seem to fascinate him whenever he see another digimon expressing them. It draws out a curious nature in him that he himself barely understands.
Likes: He’s not sure what he “likes.”
Dislikes: Nor is he sure what he dislikes yet.
Virtues: Focused, attentative, and calm.
Vices: Emotionless and uncertain of himself.
History: Dracmon had always been different from other digimon, even when he was Tsumemon. His personality generally had never changed. Because he could be more efficient than other Dracmon digimon, he rose in the ranks of the DLF, and became one of Lilithmon’s right-hand servants. Dracmon never really thought too deeply about the DLF. He was told it was for the good of all digimon. But as he witnessed the actions of the DLF, Dracmon started to feel … confused about it all. It wasn’t until he witnessed the destruction of a Doxmon village being protected by Yorumon, that Dracmon started to feel other things of which he did not understand.
But he did know one thing, the DLF were afraid of humans. They didn’t want humans and digimon to partner with each other. Not just because they didn’t want digimon to rely on humans, but because they were afraid of them.
Dracmon is not sure, but he feels an impulse to find one of these humans.
Sorry. I have this really bad habit of making a lot of characters.
A blessing and a curse, as they say.Naked serial arsonist Link is my new fave.
What the hell is a high school student doing carrying around $125? It's like he's asking to be jumped or held up.
In addition, can you please bold the different headings? And what I meant by the description of the Digimon, I mean what Shrub did for hers:
For example Doxmon:
Description of Digimon: Doxmon is a Lesser digimon and a natural carrier of the X-Antibody. It has no legs, so to move it can only hop and bounce around. Like Yorumon, they are nocturnal digimon. They cannot adjust to light until they evolve to Yorumon and adapt to it. Should they degenerate from Yorumon back to Doxmon, they will maintain their adaptation to light. Like Yorumon, they will still always prefer darkness. Sometimes, they will get over-stimulated in a bright and loud environment, and quickly seek out a place that is quiet and dark. They tend to be more timid creatures. Strangers make them particularly skittish (they will use their bubble attack when startled and frightened). However, once they warm up to someone, they tend to be very cuddly.
Name: Leita Serwen
Birthday: March 14th
Appearance: 5’ 1” and 102 lbs. Her black hair is long and straight, flowing down near her elbows. It has very light waves sweeping through it, but it is mostly straight. It’s silky and fine with just enough volume so that it doesn’t just hang flat on her skull. She prefers to keep it parted neatly down the middle. Her bangs are almost as long as the rest of her hair, reaching a little past her shoulders. They frame and flow around her face. Leita’s eyes are a dark emerald green, and tend to be big and wide at times, expressing her innocent and pure nature, and not at all suggesting any kind of stupidity. They’re also good at expressing the number of emotions Leita can’t seem to keep off of her face.
Her face is heart-shaped and the structure of the bones adds to her delicate looks. Always petite and delicate features. It follows with her nose, mouth, and jaw, flowing around her eyes and in her nearby eyebrows. Her nose and ears turn pink in the cold very easily. Her skin tone is that of a cream ivory, complimenting her light pink lips. It is very smooth and soft to the touch.
Leita is short and petite. Her small and slender body is soft, for she spends most of her time drawing, studying, and tending to her garden. Leita does like to go for jogs to clear her mind and keep her body healthy. Her feminine curves are not as pronounced and generous as the more sensuous woman’s tend to be. Leita’s shape is obviously feminine, but her curves are gentle like her soul. Her breasts are small but they fit her body perfectly.
Mostly Japanese, has American descent somewhere in her lineage.
Clothes - She wears normal fitting jeans and shirts. Nothing very flashy or that shows too much of her body. She doesn't often wear skirts or dresses but does occasionally. She tends to like baggy sweaters and light hoodie jackets, usually in black, gray, or dark shade colors of green. The shirts she wears underneath usually fit. Sometimes they may be fairly girlie and pretty. A lot of the time they're rather plain, or almost boyish. Like the black Zelda T-shirt with the Health Hearts half-way filled up on them. However, they always fit well to her figure.
Special Ability/Talent: Leita is a talented artist. Her favorite mediums are graphite, charcoal, and acrylic paints. She can draw very realistic and life-like portraits as well as enjoying abstract works and mixes of the two.
She also likes to garden and is pretty knowledgeable about plants. She studies well and holds good grades. She knows some first aid.
Carried Possessions: Her art portfolio. It carries all her art supplies. Backpack for other school supplies, and a cell phone, dark green, nothing too fancy. It has a navi phone charm and rupee charms of several colors. ipod nano and headphones.
Type of Digidestined: Digi-Mentalist
Digivice Color: Light Pink
Role: The Sixth Ranger/The Chick (or the Heart)
Personality: Leita is an extremely quiet and timid person. She dislikes attracting attention to herself, especially in front of large groups of people. She does better one-on-one with others. However, even still she is painfully shy. She has a hard time talking to people she doesn't know. She uses her long hair to hide from others. She has great difficulty even looking someone in the face. Very rarely does she look others in the eyes. She is the kind of girl who stares at her feet as she walks through the halls rather than look up. Even when she speaks, she tends to mumble. She will stutter when nervous and may even mumble even more quietly. Others often have to ask her to speak up.
Obviously, she has an extremely low self-esteem. She doesn't really have any friends other than her own family, which would be her brother and her foster mother. She can talk to them rather easily. She is generally comfortable and at peace when she is with them. Perhaps Leita would like friends of her own, but she is too afraid and shy to actively seek out others. She doesn't really know how. So she just sticks to her family and her hobbies.
She is very smart and has an excellent memory, which allows her to do very well academically. She tends to be A student, except with subjects like math, which she struggles with more. Leita even tends to bury herself in school and homework if something is bothering her. She tries to escape through school work, art, or even household chores and her garden at home. Though she is very shy, she still tries to be nice and polite to others.
Likes: Art, nature, plants, classical music, children, and taking care of her loved ones.
Dislikes: Being the center of attention, violence, conflict, sexual behavior.
Virtues: Very sweet, caring, and loving. Innocent, pure, and gentle. Honest and hard working.
Vices: Very timid, has a hard time sticking up for herself or even talking to strangers. Polite to a fault, it can put her in compromising situations.
History: Her father was a cop, who got on the bad side of the yazuka. They attacked their home when she was 10, and both her parents were killed. Her brother, Khaz was witness to the brutal deaths of his parents, particularly the death of his mother. Leita only saw her father shot throw the head.
They were given into the care of their distant uncle, who would physically abuse Khaz. Leita always begged him to stop, and it caused her great depression to begin with. When she was 13, he started raping and sexually abusing her for about six months before her brother walked in on it happening. He went mad and killed their uncle.
Naomi, another cop and a friend of her father’s, answered the call. She managed to argue the case for self-defense for Khaz, getting him off on the charges (they found evidence of previous physical abuse all over his body), and took them in as her foster kids. Neither he nor Leita mentioned the rape. Naomi recently moved them, changing their school to somewhere a little closer, Shinjuku Senior High School. It was mostly to take them to a place where no one would know them. Vicious rumors spread like wild fire in their old school, and Khaz and Leita lost what friends they had once had. It was time to start over.
Khaz Serwen: Her charismatic but deceptive older brother. Leita does her best to not burden him, but he is always taking it upon himself to look out for her. In truth, she wants to protect him as much as he desires to protect her. He is a bit smothering of her, but Leita lets him because she feels she owes him that much, because of what he had gone through because of her.
Naomi Shizuka: A cop and a friend of her father’s. She’s a prideful but kind-hearted woman. Having never married or had children of her own because of she focused primarily on her career for most of her life, she decided to take in her old friend’s children. She didn’t want them to get lost in the system or get separated from each other, or worse, be abused yet again by another foster home. So to protect them, she had devoted herself to them. It’s been a couple years since the death of Leita’s uncle, but the family has adjusted to each other. Naomi still feels rather new to the parent thing, but she is giving it her all.
Appearance: Cutemon resembles a bi-pedal bunny rabbit. This is due to his long ears, which aren't actually ears, but very sensitive organs that detect the presence of other Digimon. It make Cutemon very difficult to sneak up on. He's pink and wears a darker pink scarf and purple and white headphones.
Personality: Cutemon is rather sweet, gentle, and kind. Despite this, he sometimes attempts to be more masculine with the phrase, boys don't cry, which he is not always very successful at doing. However, it's usually difficult to discern his gender otherwise. He's playful and innocent by nature.
History: Cutemon used to be partnered with Taiki Kudo, a previous General type digidestined. He settled in the plains/grass zone, joined xros heart for a time, fought the bagra army, then things went back to normal for a time. The the DLF started taking control. It was small things at first. But Cutemon and the other ex-digimon partners thought it was suspicious. It wasn't until Arresterdramon started acting oddly that he realized something serious was going on. Being an ex-partner for most recent generation of digidestined, he knows he needs help. Cutemon makes a plan with the rest of the ex-partners. He needs to make it through the firewall somehow to get help while the others start forming a resistance.
OK guys, while we are waiting for Haagar to finish up with his edits and such, we should begin to think about what we are going to do for the opening.
Now the first day we'll technically be starting on is Aug. 27. My opening post will have Dorumon fleeing the Digital World and stumbling across Shinjuku Senior High School. Aka, where we go to school. Peering through the bushes, he'll watch Shiki win the track meet and break the school record. He instantly becomes enamored by her, and decides to approach her.
It's the next day (Tues, Aug. 28) and all of us are in class. (Please check the first post to see what class you are in.) We will go through the school day and afterwards I'll have Shiki going home when she meets Dorumon.
Now, what you people should be thinking about is how you will meet your Digimon. When you will be meeting your Digimon.
In addition, we will have transfer students being introduced the first day of classes. This isn't so much important to those who aren't in class 1-1, but it will be something talked about around the school and will be part of the "key events."
If you have any questions or ideas you would like to shoot off, please start now.
I would like to encourage everyone to check out the Japanese Culture 101 spoiler in the first post. The uniform pictures are posted in there along with other useful information. The uniforms are basically black and white in color (Ruki and I have discussed this).
Done. Most of what was needed in the description is covered in the other areas.
Okay, so Ruki wanted me to explain for her what she wants you to do.
Here is what you have done:
Description: Viridimon is a Spirit Digimon with the attribute of Forest. He is bipedal, and can run like a regular human. His name is derived from the latin word for green.Description: Pardusmon is a quadrupedal Digimon that looks like a Puma. He is naturally more aggresive, and more animalistic as well.Description: Selvamon is a cross between Viridimon and Pardusmon. He is more aggressive than Viridimon, but not as animalistic as Pardusmon.
The Digimon Description is not a description of this individual digimon. It is a description of the digimon as a group. There is more than one agumon, and while they all have their own unique and individual personalities, they are the same kind of digimon. So they will have qualities that are inherit in their nature.
The Digimon Description is basically a description of that group/kind of digimon in a whole. It is not a description of their appearance but of their basic and innate nature, which is still somewhat different from their unqiue individual personalities though their personalities can be influence by their general nature.
So Ruki said what you added was good, not wrong, but it's not enough. You do not talk about about that digimon as a whole. What its innate qualities are that it is likely to share with other digimon of their same kind.
Description of Digimon: Ombramon is champion level digimon and a natural carrier of the X-Antibody. They tend to be nocturnal but can handle light just fine. Their larger bodies have the capacity for more powerful hits than Yorumon. However, they still remain very clever and strategic. Ombramon always keep their enemies on their toes, even if the enemy is more powerful than they are. They calmly analyze their enemies weaknesses and expectations, and then strategically destroy them. They are more stoic and prideful individuals. However, they also have a deep sense of honor, though different than from others. Because they do not mind using tricks and ploys in their strategies. They do not mind attacking a foe whose back is turned to them. But they will not bully the young and the weak. They also never underestimate their foes.
Don't get confused by the other digimon partners who do not have this section Digimon Decription. Because if the digimon is already a pre-existing digimon (i.e. can be found in the digimon wiki), it does not need a Digimon Description section, because you can link it to the digimon wiki, which provides a description of that type of digimon. But if you are making up your own kind of digimon, like you and I have for a character, you need this section because there is no pre-existing description for the type of digimon we are creating.
So please, elaborate more on your digimon descriptions.
Well, the thing is, there IS only one of them, they are spirit Digimon. And that is why I was struggling a bit.
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Hmmm, okay, so I have been discussing with Ruki. It is unclear if there is more than one of each type of Spirit digimon. So you do have a point there (and I was not aware of this because I am not an expert on digimon).
However, what she does want you to do for the description of each of these Spirit digimon is to explain and describe what/which ancient and legendary digimon warrior did this Spirit arise from? Because all Spirit digimon are unique because of this same basic origin in all of them.
Here's a link to the Ten Legendary Warriors that the already established Spirit digimon come from. Have fun making up stuff.
So, yeah, there it is. No idea if that will cut it, it is basically copy paste of a few sentences in the description.
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